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  • Writing Activities Re: First Paragraph Feedback

    Very good. The second sentence is especially wonderful. The sentences all flow nicely and give a good image of the house without being tedious. I'd probably read it. ______ Many ...

    Feb 25, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Name the Character Above You

    Tanya, Veronica, Gabriella. A man who is dead (yet alive), and found by the heroine of the story chained to a rock in the Underworld with no memory whatsoever. He ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Make a movie trailer

    This is a great Idea! All of yours sound amazing! [Camera swoops in on devested Seattle. Buildings are crumbled and concrete is scattered everywhere. It looks as though bombs have ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: First Paragraph Feedback

    It was all right. You introduced the characters well, and painted a nice, pleasing picture. It does a bit too much 'telling'. You might want to choose something a little ...

    Feb 22, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    A mystery that stars a sarcastic and bitter man reluctantly drawn into a dilemma. ________ The Adventures and Woes of Gregory Smit.

    Feb 22, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: You know you're a writer when...

    You know you're a writer when... ...the letters on your keyboard have been worn away from constant use. ...you family officially thinks you're insane after walking in on you yelling ...

    Dec 8, 2008
  • NovMo Archives Re: When Characters Take Control

    It happens it all good writers. You're minding your own business, making head-way on your lovely story, when suddenly you get the feeling you've just lost control. Before you know ...

    Nov 8, 2008
  • NovMo Archives Re: Post Your NaNo Cover!

    :D

    Nov 8, 2008
  • NovMo Archives Re: Snipits from your story.

    I also started two days ago :) I'm really excited though. Gregory, unfortunately, does not have a narrator whispering in his ear, so he did not know how important this ...

    Nov 7, 2008
  • NovMo Archives Re: What's your NaNo '08 about?

    Times done NaNoWriMo: Never before. '08 NaNo Name: The Adventures and Woes of Gregory Smit Genre: Adventure Plot Idea: Upon entering the midst of my story, you will be thrust ...

    Nov 7, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    Sounds to me like some sort of summer story, maybe about a young girl or boy growing up. Perhaps some light romance involved. Sort of a Tom Sawyer thing. I ...

    Nov 7, 2008
  • NovMo Archives Re: Post Your NaNo '08 Wordcount!

    1926....i just started today....*horrifed* i didn't realize I was so far behind...

    Nov 6, 2008
  • NovMo Archives Re: NaNoWriMo Title!

    For many people, the title of a book is what draws them in. What's yours? I'll start :) The Adventures and Woes of Gregory Smit

    Nov 6, 2008
  • NovMo Archives Re: Snipits from your story.

    Many people often regard Brussels-sprouts negatively, ignorant about the fact they actually have the ability to heal bullet wounds, destroy cancer, and ward off angry pelicans. If the end of ...

    Nov 6, 2008
  • NovMo Archives Re: Post your first NaNoWriMo sentence!

    Many people often regard Brussels-sprouts negatively, ignorant about the fact they actually have the ability to heal bullet wounds, destroy cancer, and ward off angry pelicans.

    Nov 6, 2008


i got called an enigma once so now i purposefully act obtuse
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