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Re: First Paragraph Feedback
Very good. The second sentence is especially wonderful. The sentences all flow nicely and give a good image of the house without being tedious. I'd probably read it. ______ Many ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: Name the Character Above You
Tanya, Veronica, Gabriella. A man who is dead (yet alive), and found by the heroine of the story chained to a rock in the Underworld with no memory whatsoever. He ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: Make a movie trailer
This is a great Idea! All of yours sound amazing! [Camera swoops in on devested Seattle. Buildings are crumbled and concrete is scattered everywhere. It looks as though bombs have ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
It was all right. You introduced the characters well, and painted a nice, pleasing picture. It does a bit too much 'telling'. You might want to choose something a little ...
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Re: Title Feedback
A mystery that stars a sarcastic and bitter man reluctantly drawn into a dilemma. ________ The Adventures and Woes of Gregory Smit.
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: You know you're a writer when...
You know you're a writer when... ...the letters on your keyboard have been worn away from constant use. ...you family officially thinks you're insane after walking in on you yelling ...
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Re: When Characters Take Control
It happens it all good writers. You're minding your own business, making head-way on your lovely story, when suddenly you get the feeling you've just lost control. Before you know ...
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Re: Post Your NaNo Cover!
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Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: Snipits from your story.
I also started two days ago :) I'm really excited though. Gregory, unfortunately, does not have a narrator whispering in his ear, so he did not know how important this ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: What's your NaNo '08 about?
Times done NaNoWriMo: Never before. '08 NaNo Name: The Adventures and Woes of Gregory Smit Genre: Adventure Plot Idea: Upon entering the midst of my story, you will be thrust ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Title Feedback
Sounds to me like some sort of summer story, maybe about a young girl or boy growing up. Perhaps some light romance involved. Sort of a Tom Sawyer thing. I ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Post Your NaNo '08 Wordcount!
1926....i just started today....*horrifed* i didn't realize I was so far behind...
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: NaNoWriMo Title!
For many people, the title of a book is what draws them in. What's yours? I'll start :) The Adventures and Woes of Gregory Smit
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Snipits from your story.
Many people often regard Brussels-sprouts negatively, ignorant about the fact they actually have the ability to heal bullet wounds, destroy cancer, and ward off angry pelicans. If the end of ...
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Post your first NaNoWriMo sentence!
Many people often regard Brussels-sprouts negatively, ignorant about the fact they actually have the ability to heal bullet wounds, destroy cancer, and ward off angry pelicans.
Nov 6, 2008
